Flamingos have 2 legs and a very long tail. They're ginormous. They have 2 legs on the front and they have 2 legs on the back.
When flamingos are born they have pink skin.
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Flamingos have 2 legs and a very long tail. They're ginormous. They have 2 legs on the front and they have 2 legs on the back.
When flamingos are born they have pink skin.
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Hi Cody its Gracie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your work because you added so much information.Next time you could make you sentences make a little more sense.But keep up the great work.
Gracie.SHS
ok i will do it next time
DeleteHello cody i like how you told us so much facts and how you checked your words.You could put more words or some uniqe facts like they have pink skin like you said.From Josh
ReplyDeleteHello Cody i really like your flamingo DLO but i think your facts doesn't make since, like the part you told me that new born flamingos are pink but they are actually grey or white, so you should fix your flamingo DLO, from Samuel.
ReplyDeletenot dlo i mean writing
Deletewhat do you mean notdlo
DeleteHi cody I like your slide's that you put on thank you for posting this with us i like that you showed us what you did.Maby you could do more slide's.By Nikoro
ReplyDeleteok i will
DeleteOh and happy birthday it might not be your birthday when you read this but any way happy birthday.
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